Final Editing of Golden Spike

I have been busy lately doing the final editing of Golden Spike, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book Three. This book takes Will Braddock and his friends through the final year of construction of the first transcontinental railroad and ends with the driving of the golden spike at Promontory Summit, Utah, on May 10, 1869.

Reenactment of the driving of the golden spike.

Reenactment of the driving of the golden spike.

It always amazes me when I receive the work of the copy editor at Five Star Publishing. It’s obvious that I have trouble spelling. Not that I don’t have all the right letters in most of the words, but I have difficulty determining whether a word is compound, hyphenated, or separated. I will provide an example:

Select the correct spelling:

  1. stage coach
  2. stagecoach
  3. stage-coach

You cannot rely upon the spellchecker on your computer. Microsoft Word accepts all three. But the only correct answer is 2. stagecoach.

Did you know that packhorse is one word, but saddle horse is two? No wonder folks learning English as a secondary language can be confused. I grew up with English, and I struggle with some of these “rules.”

I am very happy to have a competent copy editor working over my manuscripts before they go to print. In the next few days I will be returning my comments on this final editing pass to Five Star, then they can proceed with cover design and production of the Advance Reading Copy, or galley as it’s sometimes called.

Look for the final book in The Iron Horse Chronicles to be published in the next several months. Traditional publishing is a slow process, but worth it. The finished product is always a thing to be proud of. Also, keep checking this website. Very soon I will post the first three chapters of Golden Spike.

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Fourth of July 1867 in Cheyenne

Will Braddock, in Eagle Talons, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book One, experienced the Fourth of July in 1867 at the founding of the city of Cheyenne, Wyoming. Some historians hold the position that General Grenville M. Dodge, Chief Engineer for the Union Pacific Railroad, did not name the city. Since Dodge is the most central historical character in my trilogy about the building of the first transcontinental railroad, I chose to accept his claim from his memoirs that he did. Since he wrote that he named the city, and since he thought at the time he named the city, I give him credit.

Cheyenne, Dakota Territory, 1867

Cheyenne, Dakota Territory, 1867

The above photo shows how Cheyenne looked in 1867. Will Braddock, were he alive today, would recognize the location. The first UP train entered Cheyenne on November 13, 1867, a little more than four months after its founding. The city became one of the major Hell on Wheel towns at that time, and the population jumped from a handful of railroad workers to over 4,000 residents.

Cheyenne, Wyoming, 1868

Cheyenne, Wyoming, 1868

At the time of its founding, the site of Cheyenne lay within Dakota Territory. Wyoming would not become a state until the following year. Will Braddock learns about this historic event in Bear Claws, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book Two. By mid-1868, Hell on Wheels had moved farther west, but Cheyenne continued to prosper. Dodge had selected the site to be the major rail facility for the UP before the tracks commenced the steep climb into the Rocky Mountains. Jenny McNabb would recognize the main street in the above photo as the one she rode down in Bear Claws on her way to visit her sister, Elspeth.

Happy 0ne-hundred forty-ninth birthday to Cheyenne. Next year it will probably put on quite a show during Frontier Days when it will celebrate the sesquicentennial of the city’s founding. In Eagle Talons, I describe the first Fourth of July in the city that became known as the “Magic City of the Plains.”

 

 

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2016 Spur Awards

WWA LogoWestern Writers of America awarded the 2016 Spur Awards to the winners Saturday night, June 25, at its annual convention in Cheyenne, Wyoming. I want to give a big shout out to all the winners. I am proud to be a member of WWA, and pleased to say that I know most of the winners personally. I was not able to attend this year’s convention, but I was with them all in spirit this past week while they surely enjoyed another great convention.

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Review the complete list of the winners and runners-up on this page of the WWA website. Whether you read fiction or non-fiction, prefer historical or traditional, or like juvenile or adult books, you will find the best of the best in this list. Note that the link brings up the 2016 listing first; but by scrolling up, you can find the winners for all years back to 1953. http://westernwriters.org/winners/#a2016

LuciaStClairRobsonI want to offer special congratulations to fellow WWA member Lucia St. Clair Robson. She received the Owen Wister Award for Lifetime Contributions to Western Literature. http://westernwriters.org/2016/06/lucia-st-clair-robson-to-receive-2016-owen-wister-award/

Her books are masterful, and I recommend all of them to you. Check Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or your favorite book seller to find her works. Also, check out her fabulous website: http://www.luciastclairrobson.com/

EagleTalonsFrontSmall If you have read my book Eagle Talons, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book One, you will recall she wrote the following, wonderful blurb for my book’s cover:

“Engaging action and vivid detail make the far-ranging adventures of Robert Lee Murphy’s likeable young protagonist reminiscent of Mark Twain’s Huck Finn.” Lucia St. Clair Robson

Congratulations to Lucia and all the Spur Award winners for 2016.

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Traveling the Hundredth Meridian Expedition Route

Today, you can travel via Interstate 80 some of the Hundredth Meridian Expedition Route taken in 1866 by 150 special guests of the Union Pacific Railroad. I wrote about the “First Wild West Show” on June 6, 2016. That post discussed how the Union Pacific’s “Doc” Durant’s staged a wild west show during the excursion he hosted to tour the construction progress on the first transcontinental railroad.

John Carbutt's Stereograph of Visitors to the Hundredth Meridian.

John Carbutt’s Stereograph of Visitors to the Hundredth Meridian.

Modern Interstate 80 whisks an automobile driver rapidly across southern Nebraska from Omaha to North Platte, then on into Wyoming. The first half of the highway journey in this direction does not follow the original route of the Union Pacific Railroad. It is not until you are about half way across the state that the road begins to parallel the initial tracks laid down by the first transcontinental railroad.

To reach Columbus, Nebraska, the site of Durant’s Wild West Show, you must travel 75 to 80 miles off I-80. You can visit the Platte County Museum in Columbus, but there is nothing left of the original Hundredth Meridian Expedition campsite. http://www.megavision.net/museum/index.htm

Great Platte River Road Archway Spans I-80

Great Platte River Road Archway Spans I-80

I-80 and the original railroad come together near Grand Island, Nebraska. A short distance west, you reach Kearney, site of old Fort Kearny State Historic Park, which was passed by Durant’s special train. An unusual museum exists near here. Spanning the traffic lanes of I-80 is the Great Platte River Road Archway. It provides the visitor with excellent life-size representations of traveling across Nebraska in earlier times. http://archway.org/

About half way between Kearney and North Platte, you come to Cozad, Nebraska. This is where Durant erected his “monument” commemorating the Hundredth Meridian victory which awarded to the Union Pacific the right to continue building westward. In Cozad, you can visit the museum to learn more. https://www.facebook.com/100th-Meridian-Museum-225548467456024/      

The original excursionists traveled as far as Platte City, now North Platte, Nebraska, on the Union Pacific’s rails. In October 1866, the UP provided service between Omaha and Platte City. Visit the railroad museum here. http://visitnorthplatte.com/attraction/cody-park-railroad-museum/

If you don’t make any stops, the modern automobile driver can travel from Omaha to North Platte in half a day. In 1866, the participants on the Hundredth Meridian Expedition made the journey in two days, traveling at the fastest speed then known for man–forty miles per hour.

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Wyoming History News Reviews Bear Claws

Wyoming History News HeaderWyoming History News reviewed Bear Claws, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book Two in its June 2016 issue. The News is published ten times a year for members of the Wyoming State Historical Society. Distribution is to members only, and no copies are sold or made available for sale.

It was gratifying to read the positive review of Bear Claws. Since most of the readers of this blog will not have access to the Wyoming History News, I am providing a copy of their review here.WSHS Bear Claws ReviewBear Claws has been accepted by the Wyoming State Historical Society for a possible award this year, Notifications to winners will be made the end of July. Here’s hoping!

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The First Wild West Show

German Print of 100th Meridian

German Newspaper Print of Hundredth Meridian Excursion

The first wild west show was a complete surprise to its audience. The incentive for staging that performance was not to sell theatrical tickets. The show was gratuitous. It was a celebration for having won a race—the first race in the competition to build a transcontinental railroad. The 1862 Railroad Act, as amended by the 1864 Railroad Act, signed into law by President Abraham Lincoln, contained a provision awarding the right to build the eastern portion of the cross-country railroad to the first company to lay track to the Hundredth Meridian. The winner could continue westward to join with the Central Pacific coming out of Sacramento, California.

Two companies competed for the prize: the Union Pacific Railroad (UP) starting from Omaha, Nebraska, and the Union Pacific Eastern Division (UPED), originally named the Leavenworth, Pawnee & Western Railroad, beginning in what is now Kansas City, Kansas. The UP began construction in December 1863, while the UPED got a head start by laying its first track in September 1863.

Thomas "Doc" Durant

Thomas “Doc” Durant

The demands of the Civil War limited access to equipment and materials, the Indians on the plains repeatedly attacked construction crews, and turmoil in upper management resulted in confused directions to field supervisors. The manipulative leader of the UP, Thomas “Doc” Durant, was savvy enough to realize construction was proceeding too slowly to win the race. In February 1866, he hired the Casement brothers, Jack and Dan, to take responsibility for laying track. Jack Casement, a brevet brigadier general during the war, stood only five feet four inches, but he commanded everyone’s respect because General “Jack” established military discipline in the track laying force. Durant’s crowning management decision was to entice General Grenville M. Dodge to resign his military commission and accept the position of Chief Engineer in May 1866. Dodge immediately structured the entire UP organization in a military fashion.

General Dodge and General “Jack” worked well together, and despite continued interference from Durant, the UP won the race on October 6, 1866, reaching the Hundredth Meridian near present-day Cozad, Nebraska. The UPED, which later changed its name to the Kansas Pacific Railroad, shifted its efforts toward building to Denver.

John Carbutt's Stereograph of UP Directors at the Hundredth Meridian.

John Carbutt’s Stereograph of UP Directors at the Hundredth Meridian.

Sensing the promotional benefit to sell UP stocks and bonds, which were not the most demanded investment at the time, “Doc” Durant decided to celebrate his victory by hosting a Grand Excursion to the Hundredth Meridian in December 1866. Durant sent out three hundred invitations to a specially selected group, including President Andrew Johnson and his cabinet, all members of Congress, and many military commanders and foreign dignitaries. President Johnson declined, but among the two hundred who accepted were Robert Todd Lincoln, recently graduated from Harvard, Rutherford B. Hayes, who would become the nineteenth President, and George Pullman, who lent Durant four of his special passenger coaches. To document the festivities Durant brought along numerous newspaper reporters and two photographers, one of whom was John Carbutt from Chicago. To entertain the guests, “Doc” also included two musical bands.

Once the entourage had congregated at Omaha, two locomotives pulled nine cars westward. In addition to the four Pullman cars, there were a baggage/supply car, a mail car, a kitchen car, the Lincoln Car, and a specially designed “directors’ car.” One has to wonder what Robert Lincoln thought when he saw Durant using as his personal coach the car that had transported his father’s body from Washington, DC, to Springfield, Illinois.

John Carbutt's Stereograph of Pawnee Indians participating in Hundredth Meridian Excursion.

John Carbutt’s Stereograph of Pawnee Indians participating in Hundredth Meridian Excursion.

After a leisurely 100-mile ride from Omaha to Columbus, Nebraska, the guests were offered the opportunity to sleep that night in a tent camp. Following dinner provided in a circus-sized tent, Durant entertained the gathering with the opening act of his wild west show. General Dodge had arranged for several Pawnee Indians from a nearby reservation to perform a war dance. Dodge knew these peaceful Indians from when the Pawnee Scouts provided protection for the Army troops he had commanded on the western frontier. Now, these same scouts were protecting the UP’s construction teams from raids by the Sioux and the Cheyennes, the habitual enemies of the Pawnees.

The next morning, the Pawnees woke the campers with act two of the show. Dressed as Sioux warriors, they raced through the campsite in a mock attack. After the guests’ screaming diminished, Durant provided a refreshing breakfast in the dining tent. Then, it was back aboard the special train which stopped later at an elevated point from where the spectators witnessed act three, a simulated battle between the Pawnees and the Sioux, with the Pawnees again playing both parts. That night the train stopped opposite Fort McPherson, near present-day North Platte, Nebraska. From there, a work train took the more curious the next day to the end of track ten miles farther west, 290 miles from Omaha, to witness the Casement brothers’ crew at work.

On the return journey eastward, the travelers stopped at the Hundredth Meridian for photographs. Later, the train paused to allow the passengers to traipse through a large prairie dog village. As a final encore act, that night Durant concluded the celebration by having the prairie set on fire, the flames racing twenty miles along the horizon.

The UP gained substantial publicity from Durant’s Hundredth Meridian Excursion, allowing the company to sell additional shares and more bonds to finance early work on building the first transcontinental railroad. This did not solve all the UP’s financial problems. Durant and the board of directors constantly scrambled to find financing.

Buffalo Bill's Wild West Show Poster.

Buffalo Bill’s Wild West Show Poster.

Seventeen years later, in 1883, following the “subduing” of the Plains Indians, many of the Pawnee “actors” from the Hundredth Meridian Excursion joined Buffalo Bill’s Wild West Show. This time, the Pawnees joined with their traditional enemies the Sioux in entertaining the world. But, the lucky excursionists who accepted Durant’s invitation had witnessed the first wild west show.

Will Braddock would have been delighted to be among those excursionists, but he did not come on the scene until the following year when The Iron Horse Chronicles gets under way. If the UP had not won the race, however, Will’s adventures might not have occurred.

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Orphans Preferred

Wanted. Young, skinny, wiry fellows not over eighteen. Must be expert riders willing to risk death daily. Orphans preferred.

Pony Express StatueSo read an 1860 poster advertising for riders for the Pony Express. As many of the readers of this blog are aware, every few weeks I contribute a blog posting to Mad About MG History. On May 26, 2016, I wrote about the Pony Express. This thrilling episode in our country’s history only lasted a few months, but it continues to fascinate all of us.

Read my posting at this link: http://madaboutmghistory.blogspot.com/

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SCBWI Summer Reading List 2016

logo-scbwiThe Society of Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators has released the SCBWI Summer Reading List 2016. Eagle Talons, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book One is included. The following link will take you to the reading list organized by Divisions, or geographical regions, where the authors reside. To find Eagle Talons, scroll down and select the Southwest Division, which includes Nevada. The list will open as a PDF document. http://www.scbwi.org/list-of-pal-publishers/

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After the file opens, scroll to page 104 and you will find the listing for Eagle Talons included in the category for Grades 6 – 8. The books within a grade category are listed alphabetically by title.

Before you leave the Southwest Division reading list, I want to point out two books written by friends from Nevada with whom I interface frequently.

Bull Rider CoverListed right about Eagle Talons on page 104 is Bull Rider by Suzanne Morgan Williams. Suzanne and I are both regular bloggers on Mad About MG History. Suzanne’s book is a multiple award winner, and it is a book that adults as well as middle-grade readers will enjoy.

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Scroll up the list to page 103 and locate Pirates Off the Deep End by T. W. Kirchner in the category for Grades 3 – 5. I had the privilege of critiquing portions of this fun book by Tina who is a fellow member of our local SCBWI Word Worms.

You may want to check out other Divisions to look for recommended books in the state or region where you reside.

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Bear Claws Reviewed by Railroad History Magazine

RR History 2016Railroad History, the journal of the Railway & Locomotive Historical Society, reviewed Bear Claws, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book Two, in its Spring-Summer 2016 issue, Number 214. In my post of November 9, 2015, I wrote about Railroad History’s review of Eagle Talons, the first book in the trilogy. You can access that post by clicking on the Archives section in the sidebar. The review of Bear Claws was written by Robert Butler of Shaker Heights, Ohio. He also wrote the review of Eagle Talons. Because many of the readers of my blog will not have access to Railroad History, I will copy his review here. I am grateful to Mr. Butler for both fine reviews.

“Bear Claws is the second book of a planned trilogy for young-adult readers that recounts the fictional adventures and mishaps of 15-year-old William Braddock.

The first book in this series, Eagle Talons (reviewed in Railroad History 213, Fall-Winter 2014), chronicles Will’s transformation from runaway to game scout on the Union Pacific in 1867. The second book, Bear Claws, opens in March 1868 with Will and the other members of his survey team in dire straits. They are ill and on the verge of starving. Additionally, they are precariously camped in tents under the overhang of a cliff during a severe snowstorm. Will’s uncle, Sean Corcoran, had remained healthy and set out one week earlier to find food and help, 15 miles away, at the Bridger Pass Station.

Since Sean had not returned, Will, who had recovered, decides to hunt for game. He straps on snowshoes and follows the survey stakes back to the North Platte River and into another series of adventures, which takes him from Wyoming to Utah to California and back.

Along the way, he rescues a German count from a bear attack and foils various nefarious plans of his nemesis Paddy O’Hannigan. He also becomes friends with a Chinese tea boy working for one of the Celestial teams on the Central Pacific, rescues a fallen woman and returns her to her family, meets the grand-niece of Sacajawea, fends off an Indian attack while riding shotgun on a Wells Fargo stagecoach, and interacts with almost every person of historical importance associated with the building of the transcontinental railroad on both the UP and CP railroads.

The second volume mirrors the construct of the first. The author has maintained his accuracy with respect to historical facts and figures and maximized the number of Will’s adventures. This book may appeal to young adults who enjoy reading action adventures.”

—Robert Butler, Shaker Heights, Ohio

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Under the category of Recommended Websites in the sidebar you can find a link to R&LHS. If you like trains, like I do, please take at look at this organization and its website.

 

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Wyoming State Historical Society

Wyoming State Historical Society LogoI am now a proud member of the Wyoming State Historical Society. WSHS is a non-profit membership driven organization that encourages the study of Wyoming history. The Wyoming State Historical Society was founded in 1953 and has members across Wyoming and the United States. WSHS membership is open to any individual interested in history of Wyoming and the West. WSHS has an excellent website: http://www.wyshs.org/

Since all three volumes of The Iron Horse Chronicles contain numerous scenes occurring in Wyoming, it seemed appropriate that I join the society. I made several research trips into Wyoming while writing the trilogy about Will Braddock and his quest to determine his own destiny at the time of the building of the first transcontinental railroad. Many of the scenes in the books are based on historical events that I have tried to present accurately.

BearClawsFrontThe Wyoming State Historical Society recognizes individuals and organizations in the field of Wyoming History through an awards program. These awards are presented each year at the annual meeting of the Society on the Saturday following Labor Day. I have submitted Bear Claws, The Iron Horse Chronicles–Book Two, for consideration. To be eligible, the book must be “published during the award year and written by an author or group of authors age eighteen or over.” Since Bear Claws was published in November 2015 and the subject is based on historical events in Wyoming, I feel the book qualifies for the 2015 awards program. Keep checking my blog posts to learn if Bear Claws is fortunate enough to win recognition.

 

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